Here is the finished story, ready for you to see and enjoy. I would love your comments, both what you like about it and where it is not clear. I can see already that the words on page one are hard to read. I'll fix that in my next book. Also....Oops! a misspelling or two! My spacial relations brain and my speller brain don't communicate well. Note to self: Always, Always get a proofreader!!
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